Friday, March 6, 2015

Fall trip poem March 7

Fall Trip Poem
Fire
Stars
Tents
Tall grasses
River
Canyon wall
Uhgg! Another car driving by, shining lights on everything, and ruining the moment

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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 6, 2015 at 8:45 PM

    I like how you start like seriously and deep, but you add the small hint of humor at the end. :D

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  2. UnknownMarch 7, 2015 at 9:31 AM

    I agree. Go poems!

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  3. UnknownMarch 7, 2015 at 11:20 AM

    I enjoyed your ending. Great job!

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  4. UnknownMarch 7, 2015 at 2:52 PM

    I really like that it was a really serious prom, then at the end the car ruined the overnight and the flow of the poem. one week down, three more to go.

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