Wednesday, March 18, 2015

Fish poem March 19

Constantly
Swimming back and forth
Never stopping
Pacing quietly
A cat
walks up
and spills the fish food all over the floor

3 comments:

  1. Very cool graphic at the top. This adds to your poem. I like your ending - it makes the reader imagine the cat jumping up and trying to get the fish. Well done!

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  2. And the cat trys to eat the fish! Nice slice, and I agree with Beth Rogers.

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